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One day there was a couple two friends walking and they heard a dinosaur yell so they started to run then it started to chase them so they tried going a different direction but then one of the boys tripped and got smashed by the dinosaur and the last thing left were dinosaur foot prints and one shoe. 10min later the other kid went home and told his parents what happened they were shocked when he said what happened. So he went back and got the one last shoe to keep because he really misses his old friend.

 

1 Comment

  1. I liked this story but i think you need to add way more description because this sentence wasn’t that exciting ‘they heard a dinosour YELL so they started to run then it started to chase them so they tried going in a different direction’ and also i see that you tried to add in a couple extra words so you can make it to 100 like how you said ‘one day there was a COUPLE two friends’ i think that you definitely didn’t need the word couple.
    Good Job
    Grace

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