100Wc The hand

100Wc the hand

I suddenly turned around when I felt a hand tugging me. I then turned around and I saw these two massive hands tugging me. I tried to run but the force of the hands was too strong. I suddenly turned around and bit the hands as hard as I could and then I locked my mouth on the hand. As I unlocked my jaw from the hands the hand quickly moved away from me and disappeared into mid-air. I quickly ran home and told my mum what just happened but of course she didn’t believe me.

2 Comments

  1. You use the word hand or hands 7 times in this 100 word challenge. That’s too much! Reread it and see if you can modify the writing a little to make it flow. What else can you use instead of the word hands that still makes sense to your story?

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